New Blog Page Alert!!!

Hi all,

Exciting news! There is a new page on the blog. At the top, on the black tab, you can now access the book review page where you can tell us all about your latest read. You can even upload a picture of the book’s front cover!

We look forward to reading your recommendations.

Bye for now,

Year 4 Hall.

P.S Students of year 4 Hall, can you spot any fronted adverbials in this post?

My EXITING Resolution by Jacob

Nervously ,the young Viking was at the Training Hall.Boomer was rapidly gettingĀ his axe ready for some dragon trianing in the humungus Trianing Hall at the top of the best of the rocky cliffs in the world to me because it was massive.Boomers best friends were Pixie and Trixie they were the best twins they always had the same shields and axes they lived in candy land but I lived in pixie land but I still don’t understand why they don’t live in Pixie land. But then I had butterflies in my head then my enemy came in.Boomer had the loudest voice in the whole of Pixie land and when he sang he had the loudest voice in the whole world it was nearly the biggest in the universe!

Dragon Descriptions

There it stood. Four legs and a body. It stared at Hiccup. Hiccup stared back at its flurocesent green eyes. It had a pink body. As pink as a pig but it had black spots as black as coal. Its mouth was as pink as a flamingo. It did have fangs. It also had two heads which meant twice as much trouble. It had metallic supple wings. They were as supple as a cushion. It was… a…drrraaagggon!

What do you think of this?

What parts are effective descriptions?

What could we do to improve it?